After having a group critique and getting feedback from Margie, though the R spread was cool, the overall consensus was that I should go with the second version of CMYK line spread. I revised it a bit and shifted a few things around to come up with this:
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And with a smidge more adjustments to reduce the concentration of positive space on my page (and create more negative, resting space), I came to this design. Here is my final spread design and layout to be printed:
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